WRITING A TRAVEL NARRATIVE

by Mr. Rozell

 

Some of you know you will be traveling abroad before you leave high school, others will certainly do so in college. Writing a travel narrative is a great way to learn a lot about a different culture, history, and about yourself.

 

Before the advent of mass communications and entertainment, travel narratives were always best sellers among the literate classes of Europe. The writers were usually well educated young men with enough money to finance a sustained trip-usually a couple years! They recorded snapshots of life just by observing, comparing what they saw to what they knew, and frequently passed ethnocentric judgments on the people they encountered. Today, historians mine these unique resources to learn more about the past. One of my favorites is Peter Kalm’s Travels (1748). He was a Swedish naturalist who passed through the eastern US in 1748, describing everything around him. He even passed through this area on his way to Montreal, terrified of the wilderness and hostile Indian war parties about. He was tormented by mosquitoes day and night and writes about stripping a birch tree of its bark in the vicinity of Fort Anne to make a canoe to put into Lake Champlain to get away from here as soon as possible. Great stuff.

What's my point? The point of a modern day travel journal should be to inform yourself, not necessarily a wide audience. A photograph won't remind you of your immediate impressions years later. A journal will.

 

I was 26 and out of college when I traveled to the USSR in 1986. I did set out to write for a wider audience, combining history gleaned from other sources with my first hand impressions of what turned out to be a system that was on death's door. I was reasonably well educated on my subject and absolutely fascinated with it before I even thought of traveling there. From the feedback you have provided I think my narrative was successful in helping you learn because the writer immersed himself in the culture as completely as he could, never forgetting he was an outsider looking in. Maybe that's a model you might want to follow.

 

I did not write 130 pages while in the USSR for a week. I wrote maybe 20 or 30, then in my time away from cooking in a restaurant continued my research and added more detail of my encounters in the weeks after (before my impressions faded away). I spent at least a month on it, and it wound up in my trunk, untyped but largely completed. This is the first time I've gone through it in 14 years. It turned out to be quite a slice of history, and I wouldn't trade it for thousands of dollars! That's why it has to be published.

 

The moral of the story? Write things down! I had forgotten all about about Wayne the black marketeer, and can't even remember what my roommate Scott looked like, with or without his zit cream. lrina, on the other hand ..........

 

 

 

My trip to the USSR was my third (and, in 1997, fourth) abroad.

 

I spent a month in Spain on a summer trip while in high school, and a week in England my freshman year at college. Regrettably, I wrote NOTHING then, and remember few details. Maybe that's why I exploded with the USSR narrative. Maybe you can profit from my experience. Here's my recipe …..

 

1) Try and learn as much about the nation you visit as you can, before you go. You'll start forming impressions to write about before you even leave.

 

2) Purchase a special book to write in. Make sure the lines are suitably spaced for your size handwriting. Get a couple pens you like to write with. Don't use red ink or pencil because they are tough on the eyes later. Trust me. I wrote all my college notes in pencil. They are just about useless to me now.

 

3) Record your expectations for the trip.  In the days before you leave, begin your journal.

 

4) This is the hardest, but most important, part. You simply have to be disciplined enough to do it. Your peers are definitely going to call you a geek, and maybe you are, but deep down they are admiring you for it and wish they had thought of it.

a) Find a quiet time to write, everyday. On a structured tour you might sneak away from meals with the group early. You have to be alone to record your thoughts.

b) Try to write the same time on most days, if you can. This gets you into the habit.

 

Personally this time for me is the morning, before "distractions" wake up. (it's 6:14 am, and I've been writing here for over an hour! My little "distractions" should be ending my writing session any moment!) For you, it might be at the end of the day, if you are not too tired. The main point is you should not skip one day. On some activity filled days, you will want to write more than once.

 

5) Try to limit your writing sessions to an hour a day. After all, you went on this trip to live it, not just sit in a room and write about it. Some times you have to jot quick notes. Deal with them soon after you get back to the US.

 

6) If you want to write for a larger audience like I did, find time to flesh everything out upon your arrival home. Add more detail as you go through your journal while it is still fresh in your mind. This is important. Life tends to get in the way. This takes the most discipline of all. Try not to put it aside until you are satisfied with it. Then you can stick it in a trunk and be amazed when you dig your work out 14 years later.

 

 Ciao, baby!

 

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